Feedback Needed on New Productivity Aid

A design hit me today as I was thinking about helping people stop running around in circles and start moving towards some semblance of productivity. I've hit a roadblock and need some feedback on the design - I'd appreciate any you're willing to give.

Imagine yourself having one of those days where you're running around like crazy but not really getting anything done. The intent of this aid is to help you focus and actually get a few things done.

An alternate design using much of the same material only takes up half the page. Please, take a look and let me know what you think.

This is not the final version. [download#24]